More Out Of Pocket-ness

One of my weaving guilds has been studying the drafts of Weaver Rose of Rhode Island. He has one labeled No. 10. Here is what I 'think' he had in mind. I have expanded the given threading, (I have some errors). It will need some tweeking. I am showing the treadling as drawn-in or 'tromp as writ'.

Now wouldn't this make a nice pillow...maybe in two colors.... hummmmmm, more thinking to do!